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    It Couldn't Be Done

    Sunday, February 10, 2008, 07:57 PM EST [Writings]

    Inspired by recent events and my feelings for a woman and her children.

    Jason

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    It couldn't be done,
    So she was told
    But onward she went
    A woman so bold
    To challenge this world
    For she had a dream
    To right the wrongs of man
    so it would seem
    By belief in herself
    That her cause was true
    To build a better life
    For me and you
    To make us believe
    in ourselves again
    That pain and suffering endured
    Will at last end
    She lived our path
    Has felt our pain
    But picked up the pieces
    And began again
    She changed the world
    Dreams no more shattered
    Our future secure
    Thanks to this woman
    And what she endured
    Another tattoo mystery answered
    Everyday is a new beginning, never give up, just believe in yourself because a brighter tomorrow is always on the horizon.

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    Forgive me for not getting to comment on this sooner, I just got a bit busy lately...but I like this one, Jason. I am a bit confused on the interchanging of the words "she" and "ours" though...could you tell me how that came about for this poem?

    I am a poet, so I am curious...and I like to completely understand what it is that is in the heart of another poet when he writes...

    In loving light,

    Raven
    February 16, 2008
    02:58 PM EST

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